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Margaret South's avatar

Nice writing.

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Craig's avatar

Thank you for reading Margaret. I recall seeing Beaches in the theatre. Great film.

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M.E. Proctor's avatar

Thanks for reminding me of that very very cool beginning!

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Craig's avatar

Thanks for reading it again, Martine! I wrote this so long ago it feels historic or something!

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M.E. Proctor's avatar

It felt very fresh... a good way to dip in it again.

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kenneth M Gray's avatar

Enjoy your time in Mexico and create new memories for yourselves and Luke.

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Craig's avatar

Luke may have a new love interest by the name of the Lovely.

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Susan Theriault's avatar

Excellent writing! Thank you!

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Craig's avatar

Thank you, Susan. I really appreciate the read.

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Susan Theriault's avatar

You are welcome!

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Susan Theriault's avatar

You are very welcome!

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

This has a Dashiell Hammett flavor! Very good read.

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kenneth M Gray's avatar

Yes!

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